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Post by Kindreth Kin on Jul 15, 2006 15:41:34 GMT -5
No one going to comment on my new part of my story : the battle within" I see how it is //cry <walks over to the cornor and balls like a baby> /yells Wheres the love?  ? |
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Post by Darkmatter on Jul 15, 2006 21:32:19 GMT -5
ROFL oh kinny I did not make my run to the forums today. Until now of course. And as always its quite good. Except this time I had a strain of various emotions as I read your story. Do you write it in a different program before you paste it? I ask this cuz your paragraphs always seems to be different each time  |
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Post by Kindreth Kin on Jul 15, 2006 23:36:39 GMT -5
how exactly do you mean dark? i think it is the boards, cause when i past it itr is different then how i wrote it. i use Word to type out all me stuff.
I have noticed that sometimes when i post it, it is different then how i typed it. Such as my paragraphs some times become one.
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Post by Kindreth Kin on Jul 15, 2006 23:39:35 GMT -5
But also there were different emotions is the this part of the story too. remember it is a vision he is haveing, and he is straining with different emotions at the same time. Confussion, anger, fear, unhappiness. so if that is what you are talking about as far as the emotions go, it is ment to be that way.
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