Post by Darkmatter on Sept 23, 2005 16:53:41 GMT -5
lol you haven't gotten the lady yet. Your still a jedi and still hold to the code.
But, saying that give the story more time to develop. The story only reveals that you have the hots for Xaira. She knows you do also, but shes the type who plays hard to get. She also feels no interest towards you at the moment. Hopefully maybe that will change. Anyways, you did save the day but thats all you got under your belt. Xaira on the other hand is much more complicated then that.
BTW if it helps for story content. Xaira is dangerously walking the thin line between light and dark. Although she will never pledge her allegiance to the Empire. She is what you would call a "grey" jedi according to Wikipedia.com.
The Dark Side has shown me the way towards true greatness and ultimate power. /evil laugh You may call me...[glow=red,2,300]Baroness Ibonek[/glow] [glow=blue,2,300]Elder Jedi[/glow]Alt: Xayra Darkstar
Post by Darkmatter on Sept 23, 2005 18:40:29 GMT -5
Wow Xaira, that actually works perfectly to m developing story. You see, we don't even know your a jedi or having any force abilities. I know exactly what your talking about, grey jedi's. So its great to already know much about them, incorporating this is going to give it even more spice.
The remanents of the Droid army on the planet Theowie were finally defeated. Although they held a tremendous effort and diligence, the Clone army was simply too strong. At the sametime, the Clone armada has sustained a casualty and damage report. They didn't picture this as the future.
Jenicide, the once beautiful master healer of the Jedi arts turned into a Dark knight of the Sith. Her powers were more powerful then before and she began training her force into skills of death and destruction. However, her trade for these Evil arts left her body more pale. Her hair that was once gorgeously dirty blonde, is now silky black. Her face that was once cheerful and happy, is now sad, depressed and full of hopelessness. She was determined to find Darkmatter at all costs. For she believed that what caused her to look like this is all because of him.
Moff Rebma laid on the floor dead, with Jenicide standing only a few feet away. Both of Rebma's hands were sliced off with the aroma of seared flesh Around her neck was red blemished marks as if someone had choked her to death. The worst of all was that her eyes were still wide open, didn't even had time to shut it for her untimely death.
"The weak shall know fear and live by it." commanded Jenicide. The scene was not private, the murder happened right in the middle of the bridge onboard the Star Destroyer, Exodus. Every personnel in that room witnessed it and quickly returned to work.
"Liutenant Eewov." Jen ordered.
"ma'am?" answered a female voice.
"You are promoted to captain of this ship, dont' let me down like Moff Rebma did. Her incompetance to catch the Jedi is her downfall."
Liutenant Eewov quickly saluted and gave her word she wont' fail.
Jenicide ordered, "Were leaving the sector, to meet with another tainted Jedi, one that shares the same belief as me. Someone who replaced my once beloved Darkmatter, he understands me and was there for me."
At that moment the Imperial Class Star Destroyer took off into hyperspace.
Post by Darkmatter on Nov 11, 2005 13:59:38 GMT -5
After reading all my posts in this story, I can see why you want me to finish eh kin
Its very engaging and brings down the story to a level of personal comfort. Not to mention the story arc is amazing to my surprise. Too bad swg didn't have something like it.
BACK TO THE STORY!! ____________________________________
Meanwhile, onboard the Alamo, Dark, Eoro, Kin and Xaira were discussing their next motive in the ongoing struggle to survive.
The conversation was warm and friendly. At the same time the topics being discussed were full of seriousness and were the future plans of the rebellion. Before the crew continued, Xaira interrupted the planning to show somebody that could help.
"Gentlemen, I would say our preparations for a rebellion is going very smoothly. However as we all know, none of our strengths are on the political department. As we continued planning, i couldn't help but think we need somebody with the expertise of negotiation and information."
Dark, Kin and Eoro were curious to who this person was. Perhaps he was Senator Organa, he was always sympathetic to the jedi. Also, General Dodonna was also very opposed to the clone agenda. Who could it be....
Xaira stepped away from her chair and walked towards the door to introduce the person.
"May I introduce you to..."
The slide doors opened to revealed a slendish female figure who had a friendly face. Her dress was a Council robe and bare mostly white as the dominant colour.
".... Mon Mothma."
The three jedi's immediately got up from their chairs and greeted the political figure with appreciation.
"Thank you for the introduction Commander Xaira. Mighty Jedi's it is good to know there are a few of you left in our galaxy. The need of your abilities is needed gravely."
All three bowed with great respect and encouraged her to take a sit. The planning was long and intense. This group was one of the first to begin the rebellion. Mon Mothma and two other political figures were already starting an underground. The discussion was very long and important. During the conversation, Dark was getting tired. He hadnt gotten any sleep. He was going for almost 39 hours of no sleep. He slowed his body fatigue with the force but he knew he didn't need to keep this ongoing now that they were out of danger.
eoro himself felt it as well and knew he couldn't take much more of this. Eoro interjected, "I am sorry to break this needed preparation but I am terribly tired and need rest." Xaira, Kin and Mon Mothma apologized and did not think of the two jedi's long ordeal on theowie. As Eoro walked out of the door, the rest gave their attention to Dark who was passed out in the chair.
Xaira giggled, "Ok, lets take a break and let the two rest. I almost forgot, even jedi's are vulnerable to sleep."
Kindreth nodded and led Mon Mothma out of the quarters. Xaira followed leaving just Dark snoring in the room.
"Night General Darkmatter" Kin whispered and dimmed the lights.
okay Kindreth, this part of the story is for you. I have a writers block and can't for the love of me continue my essay.
This is my break and what the story shall unfold. ________________________________________
The Alamo shook violently, knocking General Darkmatter off his chair. The sudden vibration was violent and judging the length of his chair to the ground, it was trouble. He quickly got up and travelled to the bridge. Luckily it was close and had no loss of time.
"Report!" commanded Darkmatter.
The Commanding officer on the bridge answered.
"Sir, we suddenly had been ambushed. These new space cruisers are nothing we've seen before."
He led darkmatter to a console and opened a viewing to what had just attacked them. It looked much like the alamo and there sisters ships, except it was bigger and much more powerful.
"Sir, our scans revealed that this ship is known as a Imperial Class Star Destroyer, Incognito and supported by another one known as Unforgiven."
The Alamo, Freedom and Justice were in the dead scopes of the forward laser cannons of the two imperial class star destroyers. Lazers filled the empty space. Each Battleship poured rain and rain of laser bolts. However, clearly the new upgraded imperial class has outgunned and outplayed them.
"Fire all weapons and launch all fighters" Ordered Darkmatter.
Suddenly the comm link from kindreth lit a hologram of the jedi in front of Dark.
"Glad you could join us lad. Got any plans?"
Dark paused for a moment just to have Eoro arrive on the bridge. Eoro blurted out, "we need to find a place to hide and theres a planet not too far away."
He walked to one of the consoles nearby to show Dark where. It was 2.5 km away, definitely a good sign.
Dark asked kindreth, "You get that ol'timer?"
Kindreth nodded, "Patching to Xaira now."
The three Venator class Star destroyers began there descent towards the planet, but knew if they don't think of something soon, they will lost more than one of the cruisers. Fighters populated the space sector. Smoke and flame was everywhere. One of the Venator classes, Justice was the one last in the group. It was being pounded with the most firepower and it was quickly losing its strength. No jedi were on there, only Mon Mothma. Dark and eoro were on the alamo and kindreth-Xaira were on the Freedom.
Kindreth patched to Mon Mothma's ship and told her to hyperspace out of here.
"Greetings your highness, but I am going to skip the formalities and let you knwo our plan. Your not going to make it, i'll be frank, unless Freedom and Alamo does something. I want your commander to put all availablw power to the engines and blast away from the planet and hyperspace out of here. your our only hope of this rebellion to start. Don't argue either, I'm not in the mood."
kindreth's face was stubborn and wise-arsed the same time. Mon Mothma knew better than to question his plan. She nodded and the Hologram of kindreth disappeared. At that moment, Justice turned away from the formation and headed towars the jump point. As the sister ship broke away, Freedom and Alamo turned right around to attack a frontal assault with the Two imperial class Star Destroyers.
Dark knew who was on the two Imperial Star Destroyers, he could feel them. Jenicide, his former lover and ally and her sith master, who he had not had the pleasure of meeting. Freedom and Alamo poured all there fire power into the Incognito. The close quarters battle was intense, both sides of the ships laid a strain of fire into the other. Every laser bolt had to count. As the ships seperated to turn around for another run. Justice laid still with major damage all around the hull. It was a sitting duck with massive fires all around and hull breaches vacuuming the crew members into cold space. Escape pods immediately began to ignite and many of them headed towards the planet.
Darkmatter used to force to contact Kindreth. He was still alive, very strong signal too. He wasn't hurt. Dark smiled to himself and brought himself to reality again.
"All fighters, focus your firepower on the Incognito, there shields are down and we need to end there reign now."
all fighters converged with the Freedom towards the Incognito and Unforgiven. As the giant machines of war merged again in battle, the result was incognito erupting in a giant explosion. Freedom was hit badly as well. Shields were down, weapons were down, the only thing going were the engines. Unforgiven only had their shields knocked out. Most of the fighters had either been blown or shot down and falling down to the planet. DArkmatter knew they were going to die now if they did nothing.
"Eoro, get your lightsaber ready."
Eoro grabbed it and was ready to flip it on.
"wha-What are you doing dark...." Asked Eoro.
Dark didn't answer and ordered the helmsmen.
Prepare for ramming speed son, were going to embed ourselves into that forsaken ship. The Freedom roared its engines to the highest speed it could muster.
Jenicide watched the Incognito burst into flames. Her master was on that ship but she did not really care if he died. She learned all she needed from him. Now she is the master. She ordered another run towards the Freedom and knew after this, it would be destroyed. The Ships headed steadily towards each other except there was one difference. Freedom was directly heading for them and did not waiver one bit. Jenicide didn't understand this tactic until it was too late. As she barked the order to turn away, Freedom rammed itself onto the top of the Unforgiven. The ships slammed into each other and stayed in one place. Both of them were now motionless, dead and falling down towards the planet from the gravitational pull.....
Last Edit: Nov 21, 2005 4:00:21 GMT -5 by Darkmatter