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Post by Darkmatter on Jul 17, 2005 17:17:09 GMT -5
On the remote outer rim planet of Theowie, Darkmatter, Jedi Master and General of the Old republic laid poised against the trickery that had just been unleashed. Sid, his clone army commanding officer had just turned on him, along with the rest of the clone battlalion. Thankfully, the close isolation of the rain forest planet gave Darkmatter ample time to recovery from this ambush.
As luck with would have it, the order of Code 66 was initiated just when the droid and clone armies clashed. The raw smell of burnt flesh and melted metal feeled the air. However, even though Darkmatter was save for the time being, his comrade, Jenicide was on the other side of the planet in the clone army HQ.
Here is the continuation of the story in the genicide of the Jedi order...
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Post by Darkmatter on Jul 26, 2005 2:23:57 GMT -5
Deep in the forest planet of theowie, the forces of the Clone and Droid army laid waste to each other in a small opening grass land. The once beautiful desolate green pastures now became a violent bloody battleground. The battle was fierce, both sides with strong numbers and supplies, it was clearly one of the last strong holds of the droid armada. To add more to the scene, was one lonely jedi Knight desperately trying to survive. For the clone army are no longer at good ties with the Jedi.
Dark had figured something was wrong about the clone army, he knew they were nothing but emotionless beings. Almost just like the Droids... He knew, this battle would be the end of his life, or save his life. Thanks to the droid army, they were providing plenty distraction against the clones trying to murder Dark. To be blunt, they would have gotten away with it, if it wasnt because of the droids.
Right in the middle of the huge clash, Dark was fighting for his life. He forced jumped into the air, parrying laser bolts as he spun. Landing on top of a droid tank, he ignited his lightsaber and drew a slash right down the center of the vehicle. The tank slowly gave way and stopped in its tracks. Dark moved quickly, he needed to get out of this mess, so he could find his other jedi comrades. He sprinted towards a group of clone troopers who were pelting a droid artillery. Their backs were turned to Dark, making the sneaking ever so more easier. Dark's blue lightsaber flashed in the air, all but one clone was left. Just when he turned around, Dark stabbed the saber into the troopers chest. Before he could even catch his breath, he saw an oncoming missle to his direction. Leaping into the air, the ordanance just exploded behind him.
As he was hanging from the sky, Dark saw his moment of escape. Just 100 meters from him, was a squad of BARC speeder bikes just parked side by side to each other. It was behind the line of fire, so getting there was going to take some careful planning. He landed beside a couple of droids, whom he took care quickly. Using his force speed, he ran towards the bikes and dispatched any army unit along the way. nearing just 20 meters, he quickly jumped over a clone tank. Suddenly, the clones full well knew what Dark was doing. The extra troops in the transport tank unloaded and began firing at Dark. Dark blocked and dodged as best he could in the air but he failed to see where he was going to land.
His body smacked the top of a lonely tree. As he toppled all the way down, Dark couldn't help but think how embarrassing this looks. His head landed on a bush just under the tree. A few cuts from the branches, but Darkmatter quickly recovered from the fall only to see the clones engage in his position. To the left was the bikes. He drew a smile. Igniting his lightsaber, Dark sliced the tree leaving only the trunk. Before it tipped over, he shut off the lightsaber and palmed his hands on to the tree. Using the force his picked it up and threw it towards the clones troopers. The tree smacked most of them into unconsciousness, while the others were in disarray. At that moment Dark ran towards the bikes, slashing each one until the last. He made sure he wasn't followed and then roared the engine up, speeding towards the Clone HQ...
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Post by eoro on Jul 26, 2005 9:46:13 GMT -5
keep it coming dark....glad the bike had diehard battery =)
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Post by Darkmatter on Jul 26, 2005 17:45:12 GMT -5
Darkmatter carefully navigated his way through the think trees and short shrubs. Going well over the suggested speed, he knew time was against him and every second meant a fate he did not want to swallow. Without the force, this state of travel would kill anyone who wasn't jedi.
Luckily Dark was already close to the HQ's location, the battle had taken place just 1.4 km away. As he arrived, he would of thought the security would be tighter then he expected. Instead, it was almost night and not even a patrol was spotted in the area. The only hint of habitants was that the HQ was still powered. The HQ was mobile, easy to dispatch and relocate. Most of the essential consoles and terminals were installed in a dropship. However, to maintain hidden, most of the bunker was dug underground. That was where Dark headed.
Dark's path was clear and simple, thanks to the lifeless security. It was plagued with moist soil and shrubs in every direction. The smell of dew was in the air, and the silence was only broken from the crickets chirping in the distance. If he was to act now, he knew this was the only chance. Drawing out his lightsaber in this offensive, he quickly felt there was something behind him. Something that did not belong in this jungle. He turned around only to see a dark figure who was within striking distance, surely knowing this was going to hurt...
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Post by Darkmatter on Jul 26, 2005 21:53:24 GMT -5
The figure forced pushed Darkmatter into a tree. The slam knocked him off his feet and he lost the advantage. The dark cloaked figure ignited a lightsaber and pointed to his neck. A female voice commanded, "Get up" and edged her lightsaber even closer. Dark obeyed, until the circumstances changed, he knew he had to cooperate. He got to his feet and raised his hands into the air. She spoke again, "Now Jedi, I thought your training prevented ambushes such as these to even come close." At that moment, her voice was no longer a strong stern tone, instead it was a hint of teasing. Dark sighed, "You know how I hate it when you put me on the spot like this." He turned around to see it was his closest friend, Jenicide. He took a long look at her, which seemed to be an eternity. Ever since they were being trained in the jedi temple, Dark knew she was beautiful. From the first day he saw her till now, it was simply awestruck. Her curves were all in the right places and no matter what she was doing, she looked beautiful. Jen was a woman who striked anyone to take notice. However, not only was she beautiful, she had honours in the arts of the jedi skills. She was fluent in almost all the languages in the core systems. That is why her negotiations and comprehension was well met. She had long beautiful brown hair with streaks of blond hair. It was all natural and grew all the way down to her waist. During times of battle, she would wrap it into a pony tail just incase it would cause harm. Many Jedi questioned if it was a good idea to keep it long, but she wouldn't hear it, she thought it was beautiful and many people would agree. "But gosh its great to know your safe." Jen flicked her Lightsaber off and gave darkmatter a warm embrace. Her body was firm and toned. Dark responded with a firm hold back, but quickly backed away. "We don't have much time, we gotta get out of this planet and head back to the Jedi Council." Jen nodded, theres a squad of ARC-170 fighters just 2 clicks away. Fresh out of the hanger and ready on the launch pad. Dark smirked, "Well done" Jen winked back. At that moment both took off towards the direction of the hanger bay. As they were making there way towards the fighters, Darkmatter asked "Why are there no clone patrols and security?" Jen replied, "Eoro..." A smile flashed across Dark's face, "Just him?" "Yep" "What has he been doing to them?" "Well to be blunt, he's been using that new trick he just taught himself with... You know... jedi mind trick." Dark paused in his thoughts during the run. He and Eoro had known each other a long time, since both he and Eoro had trained under the same master. in the past, he and Eoro took the padawan trials together through think and thin, their were jedi brothers till the end. Realizing he had daydreamed, Dark met his gaze back onto the mission, he was running behind jen. Just then, trickles of water began passing down from the sky, rain was about to commence. At that moment, Dark noticed that Jen's jedi uniform was getting soaked. The fact that her robe was plain white, did not make the situation better. Immediately he began seeing the exact shape of her body and her amazing assets.... Dark blurted, "We have to stop" Jen turned her head "Whats wrong?" quickly he added "Have you been working out?" and a chuckle was left afterward. Jen followed where Dark's eyes were focused at, suddenly jen gasped and hid behind a bush. "Thats not funny mister Darkmatter." that was it, Dark matter began laughing hard and almost dropped to his knees. "I'm sorry, but it was too funny." Jen blushed, "Be a gentlemen and pass me your jedi cloak." Dark took off his dark brown cloak and tossed it towards jen. She caught it and took off her white one and replaced it with the one from Dark. "how much farther?" Dark said. "Were almost there, impatient one" jen smirked. Jen left the bush and revealed she was absolutely covered with Dark's cloak. "Lets go" she ordered. "aye" and both leaped towards the destination.
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Post by Darkmatter on Jul 27, 2005 0:37:32 GMT -5
The approach to the Hanger bay was coming into view, but the silent night was broken from outcries just from the distance. Murderous screams filled the air and soon Jen and Dark changed there direction to the sounds. Creeping near the bushes, Dark and Jen peaked over a shrub only to find a squad of clone troopers shooting frantically into random thin air. the blue bolts lit up the sky and charred the surrounding forest. One by one, each clone trooper was struck down and killed. Dark sensed this was a work of a jedi and began concentrating where a strong area of the force was. It took only a few moments, but dark narrowed it to the left, 20 meters away. He looked towards the direction and was about to let Jen know about his findings, only to notice she already was looking there. A little annoyed, Dark said "Eoro?"
"Yep" jen replied. "Lets just wait till he is done, those clone troopers are fighting amongst themselves, thanks to that knucklehead jedi."
Dark agreed, "ok then." and waved his hand in front of one of the clone troopers. The trooper was sweeped off his feet and landed on the muddy ground. The clean white and red insignia was no longer that colour, instead it was brown and mucky. The mighty genetically enhanced Clone troopers were an image of disgrace and debutchery in this scene. Only a few was left. Dark reached for his lightsaber with his left hand and placed his right on jen's shoulder. "I think its time we let Eoro know were here now." Jen nodded, "agreed" and she quickly placed her hand on Dark's lap. "Wait" she asked. Dark hesitated for a second and wondered what she was up to. Jen fronted her hand towards one of the fallen clone troopers. She began to squeeze her hand like she was picking something up. In the distance, the belt of the clone began to unwane and a concussion grenade was unhooked. Jen then delicately turned her hand and pressed her thumb into her palm. Seconds past and the grenade exploded killing the rest of the confused troops.
As the smoke cleared, an excited man came out from to the battered bloody area...
Jen and Dark mutually said "Eoro"
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Post by Darkmatter on Jul 28, 2005 21:28:34 GMT -5
Jenicide and Darkmatter left there hiding area and began walking outside to meet with Eoro. When they finally got to Eoro's position, they were met with a cloaked man not too much taller then dark, matter of fact almost the same height. His hair was long and brown, few strands braided for looks. It stretched just past his shoulders, not as long as jen's, yet it still caused more harm if under a jedi who didn't have as much experience as Eoro.
Dark pressed his hand to Eoro's and shook it passionately, "Long time pal."
"indeed" as he replied with a smile.
Jen Greeted "Hi Eoro."
He nodded, "Hiya Jen."
Soon the atmosphere of friendliness turned back to the danger of the recent turn of events.
Dark asked, "Dreagus?"
Eoro replied, "Didn't even see it coming...." he muttered. Jen bit her lip. Dark's throat began to enclose with remorse and his tone of voice was shaken. Dreagus, a good friend whom Dark hasn't seen since the start of the war. Curiously dark asked, "Ambushed?" "Afriad so, I would of been too if I hadn't use me newly found jedi mind tricks."
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Post by Darkmatter on Jul 29, 2005 1:36:30 GMT -5
Dark felt bad, but this was neither the place or time to reflect the past. He picked up his thoughts, "We better get moving, otherwise the clone troopers might know what were up to and prevent our plans."
Eoro agreed, "Right, I've taken care alot of clone troopers, most of them still think were inside the HQ and haven't bothered guarding the outside."
Dark nodded his head, "Good then we best make it to the landing platform." As both Dark and Eoro began heading to the platform direction, Jenicide gazed sadly towards Dark and Eoro. Almost like she was apologetic of the recent events. Dark questioned "Hey, Jen are you alright?" Jen quickly returned to her formal self. "ehhh yes, fine, lets get moving."
The three continued with no more obstacles and guards to stop their eager plan, as the darkness of the night finally set in, only the gloomy glow showed there path. The small patches of rain had stopped, making the journey much more bearable. With the help of the Force, it was no trouble for the experienced jedi. But, it wasn't the obstacles or guards that made Dark and the others uneasy, the dark side seem to be creeping up as they neared there destination. During this time, none spoke a word, counting on each others body language and countless times of similar missions, everyone knew exactly what needed to happen. Not to mention, conserving their strength since none had gottan any sleep since they arrived on the planet.
Jen interrupted the silence, "Can we rest for a bit? I am feeling a little dizzy."
Dark stopped first, followed by Eoro. "Ok" he answered. All three found a small dry clearing to sit and rest.
"Only for 3 minutes, we havn't much time." warned Eoro. All three kneeled in a triangular perimeter. Just a few inches from each other. Facing outward, they would feel any danger and trouble that came towards them. As the minutes went by, Dark couldn't help but think why the Clones had turned on them and what exactly is happening at the Jedi Temple. His emotions were felt with anxiety, confusion, and worst of them all, hate of the betrayal. He knew this was the path of the dark side and tried his best to let go of them. It worked for the time being, but he had to find answers and find them quick. Amongst his meditation, Dark reacted fast to a sense of the force. He stood up.
"Whats the matter." Eoro asked concernly. Dark turned around facing Eoro with worry. "Have you been sensing a growing sense of the Dark side nearing us? and just now I felt something is waiting for us." Eoro understood, "Actually yes, like were being-"
"Freeze Jedi's!" a monotone voice interrupted.
"watched..." finished Eoro. The three ignited there lightsabers and created a circle, protecting each others backs. Dark reassured "We can take them." He eyed the surrounding area, although it was pitch dark, the flash lights from the incoming troops gave him an ideal number of what they were up against. "head to Eoro's side, slowly parry and then were going to make a break with force jump." "right" replied Eoro as he scanned his side of clones. Waiting for Jen to answer, Dark barked, "Okay Jen?" Seconds past and nothing. Dark turned around and was shocked when jen wasn't standing protecting their flanks. Instead she had her light saber pointed at Eoro and him. Tears coming down her eyes she said "I'm sorry....my love.....but you don't understand." Her pink lightsaber glowed, putting Dark and Eoro on the spotlight, like target practice for a blaster range. Dark with all his feelings and emotions betraying him, he managed to say something to jen, "I wished you tried before you thought that." Eoro looking just as stunned as Dark, didn't make any sudden movements except keeping his lightsaber lit. Just then, Sid, the clone commander of the Blood rancor Battlion and former ally of Dark interjected, "Put your light sabers down jedi and surrender over to us." As Jen slowly went into a defensive stance, she added "Don't make this harder then it is. Listen, I promise you guys will not be hurt, Matriach Rebma told me and said that once we clear everything out, it will be okay." Dark didn't buy it, especially when Eoro turned his left hand towards Jen. In this moment, what felt like minutes, was only split seconds. Jen quickly defended herself by parrying Eoro's hand. But, it was too late, his force push was released before she could stop it, sending her plunging into a group of clone troopers. Be that as it may, his sacrifice did not come without a price. Just as he did so, before Jen fell back, her parry sliced off Eoro's hand and it dropped onto the ground. Right after Jen landed onto a group of clones, Sid and the rest of the other clones fired into the jedi. Dark grabbed eoro as he parried the bolts towards the troops. Eoro, moaning and groaning to the excreciating pain, his lightsaber was on his right hand, but it was no longer on. Dark knew this was their only chance, Jen was still recovering from her fall and was the only one capable of catching him and Eoro. Using all his might, Dark palmed his hand onto the ground. Letting out a quick warcry, he used all the force he could muster and fired it into the ground. Thanks to the earlier picked area, this part of the ground was one of the few places that were dry. Dark's mini earthquake sent nearby clones falling off their feet and most of all, shooting a giant ball of dust into the air. Fearing for safety, the clones hesitated in pointing their rifles, fearing they might hit each other. Dark shut off his blue lightsaber, grabbed Eoro by the arms and said "Force jump now!." Eoro did exactly what Dark asked and both leaped up into the clear air...
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Post by Kindreth Kin on Jul 29, 2005 14:33:06 GMT -5
awsome story dark...
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Post by Darkmatter on Jul 29, 2005 18:52:21 GMT -5
Thanx kindreth means alot ;D Eoro, leaning and using Dark as support, slowly made there way to the outer perimeter of the Clone army landing strip. Knowing if they tried to take an ARC fighter, with the currect status, both Dark and Eoro would perish. Settling down for for just a bit, Dark helped Eoro sit down into a meditative state. "Listen pal, I'm going to need you to focus the pain from your wrist, it will be hard, but I need you to do it." asked Dark. Although Eoro lost his hand, he didn't lose heart. "You got it Dark," and he gave a small smirk. Knowing Eoro was growing through alot, Dark wanted to let his friend, he was okay. He placed his hand on Eoro's shoulder. "What you did back there, thanks buddy, you saved our lives and I don't think anyone could be as brave as you." Dark let out a encouraging smile. Eoro, met dark's smile and changed from a smirk to a grin. "All in a day's work buddy." Knowing this was the time to fix Eoro's injury, Dark pulled out a small cannister of bacta. As he opened the lid, a liquid like substance that was clear was inside. Eoro, knowing full well of this healing quality gladly extended his hand to the Bacta. Dark quickly poured it onto the wrist and wrapped a bandage around eoro's formal working arm. Dark tossed away the can and turned back into the the objective. Eoro, even though in pain, he suppressed it for the time being. Everything was needed to focus there attention and smarts to pull this together.
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Post by Xaira on Aug 4, 2005 16:29:20 GMT -5
Grr, nothing angers me more than betrayal. Good story dark.
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Post by Ank'hara on Aug 10, 2005 12:22:12 GMT -5
tears, tears. Such a sad story.
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Post by Darkmatter on Sept 14, 2005 21:55:12 GMT -5
The entire Clone army base was on full alert. The two Jedi's were the prime target. The old republic is in ruins, the Empire has risen to take its place and the once peaceful galaxy is about to go through one of the most deadliest wars ever. Only a few remaining jedi were left and most of the others who did survive, joined the empire. It was almost dawn and Eoro and Darkmatter had tried to get some rest before they try initiating their plan of escape.
"Did you and jenicide have a little thing for each other Dark?" Asked Eoro. Dark paused, "yes, my friend"
"even if it was against the jedi order? I mean before it succumbed to destruction."
Dark didn't answer.
Both had laid down on a long grass area, hidden away from danger. Their jedi robes were almost dry and ready to move again. Eoro sat up.
"It doesn't matter anyways..." Dark finallyl answered. "How can you push away love? its one of the greatest gifts anyone can have. Its what seperates us from the corrupt and evil."
Eoro nodded, "it also needs us to fear and hate."
Dark smiled, "Yes, but love is not defined as fear of loss, but as one who appreciates another. Sure the chance of loss is there, but to learn to accept is more meaningful then never accepting at all. Then you will never fall to the dark side."
Eoro took in Dark's words. "Times like this, I am glad they made you a Jedi master Dark."
Eoro smiled, "You deserved it, I admire and respect you."
Dark at that moment sat up to meets Eoro's smile. "Thank you Eoro. But my neo-jedi order ways were never liked, change was never liked..."
Eoro didnt' have anything to say, he knew Dark was right, change is hard. Darkmatter's looks was not at the moment, Eoro could tell. Dark was thinking and reflecting of what had happened. Eoro did not know what to do. Even though both of them were very similar in each, Dark had far surpassed him in the jedi arts. He was not even close of being jealous, he could tell Dark was much more intune with the force then he will ever be. Suddenly Dark blinked and he eyes were focusing onto the grass land once again. He smiled, "Come on, you don't need to hear my troubles. Lets get out of here."
The jedi's stood up and stretched. "How is your arm?" questioned Dark.
"nothing cybernetics can't handle" joked Eoro. "whats the plan boss?"
"to be honest I don't know" replied Dark. But suddenly Dark reacted to Eoro's comment. "Wait, you just call me boss? were the same rank."
Eoro padded Dark's shoulder, "Yeah, but I know you more qualified to lead. Don't argue with me, I just lost my hand." Dark let out a chuckle. "Alright then, we need to get out of this planet and find any other surviving jedi's." Eoro nodded, "Back to the landing strip?" Dark shook his head, "its way to guarded now, even with our jedi skills. We also have jenicide to look out for."
Suddenly just beyond the horizon a flock of planetary ships headed toward the clone landing strip. As Dark a closer look, the ships beared the Droid army isignia.
Dark let out a breath of hope, "This might just give us that needed distraction to get out of here."
At that moment, both force leaped off towards the landing strip again, as the sounds of blasts and explosions roared.
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Dark and Eoro headed to the ever growing sounds of another battle between the clone and droid armies. This time, neither belonged or fought for any side. Leaping from tree top to tree top, Dark and Eoro could see the vicious battle taking place at the landing strip. Most of the droid army consisted of vulture droids, revealing the fact that this attack force came from space. The escorts of course was the usual droid battlions needing support before power up. Taken not totally surprised, the clone army met with similar force of power. The Clone turbo tanks that had be stationed as a perimeter had engaged plenty of them and were more then good enough to hold off the droid invaders. The anti-aerial defenses were in full swing as the clone troopers got there v-wing fighters ready. Dark and Eoro lay perched on one of the trees not too far away from the battle.
"So, what now?" Asked Eoro.
Dark replied, "we wait till the moment is right..."
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Post by Darkmatter on Sept 17, 2005 1:17:15 GMT -5
Does anyone read my story? If not I might start writing somewhere else. I have no idea if people understand what i'm writing.
Any input? stop writing cuz I suck? keep going? anything?
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Post by Kindreth Kin on Sept 17, 2005 12:28:03 GMT -5
yah, bud i have been reading ur story, i have been waiting on more. it is a damn good story
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