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Post by skyfire on Feb 3, 2006 9:20:49 GMT -5
Dark I am impressed very in depth and captivating story.
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Post by Darkmatter on Feb 5, 2006 15:36:37 GMT -5
Why thank you Sky  I'm glad you enjoyed it. Other than the last humourous post, I'm not sure if i'll continue it. I dont' even know if alot of people read it. |
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Post by Kindreth Kin on Feb 6, 2006 16:13:30 GMT -5
I did dark got a good luagh of of it.
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Post by Darkmatter on Feb 6, 2006 17:00:20 GMT -5
lol.
Out of popular demand from the closet readers ;D
they want me to continue.
Hope you check it again sometime, i'll be adding more to it.
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Post by Kindreth Kin on Feb 7, 2006 9:39:48 GMT -5
i have been checking it all the time
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Post by Darkmatter on Feb 27, 2006 23:22:19 GMT -5
NOTE: The last post of the story concerning the "LD" and the respec kit was only a joke. It did not belong in the story and please don't think it continues from there.
It continues the post before that one.
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The lightning exploded toward Xaira and Kindreth. But, the two Force wielders were well prepared. As the lightning flashed into them, a force shield interrupted the attack. The barrier was invisible, yet remained its shape because of the lightning.
"Kindreth, I can't hold this shield much longer and I don't think Dark is going to stop..." the weak xaira said.
Sweat began to flow down Xaira's cheek, the intensity of this power was too much.
"I'm not going to leave you here Xaira..." Kindreth replied. Holding the lifeless Jenicide over his shoulders and gazing at xaira, he clearly did not want this way to end. Xaira, a jedi was defending the three of them from certain death and all Kindreth could do was bring up the past. He could still remember that unique beautiful smell when Xaira walked past him on the space dock.
He couldn't let this be the end...
He wouldn't let this be the end...
He won't let this be the end...
He will change the end...
Kindreth placed the unconcious Jenicide down onto the metal floor. Than, placing his hand on Xaira shoulder, he walked past her.
"Kindreth, don't you dare be a hero!!! Get back over here!!!! Do you hear me!!!!!" Shouted Xaira.
Kindreth continued to walk outside the shield and blurted.
"There was one thing I have always wanted to do Xaira." He grinned.
"Was to have my cake and eat it too." He continued to walk towards Dark as he was speaking to Xaira.
"If we get out of here alive...you owe one..."
"Owe you what?" questioned Xaira.
Kindreth didn't reply, either because he couldnt' hear her anymore because he was outside the shield, or that he didn't want to tell her what he had in mind. Either way, Xaira didn't have to worry about her or Jen's life. The moment Kindreth walked into the force lightning, it smashed into him like a pile of bricks. But Kindreth didn't fall, he continued walking slowly to Dark. Calmly and surely, Kindreth was closing in on Dark.
"Give up Lad, Hate leads to the dark side."
Dark began to focus his energies even more. His body ignited into a blue energy flow, which poured into the force attack even more. Kindreth was knocked back. He placed his arms up like he was blocking the wind in his eyes. His feet slid back a couple of inches. However, when Kindreth adjusted to the extra force power, he continued walking towards Dark once again. The lightning did not pass Kindreth or over him. It just went straight into him, as if he was absorbing it. As the force power continued travelling from Dark's hand, it went inside Kindreth's body. Instead of Blue, it was teal.
Dark began to sweat. Panting faster and faster, he was running out of steam. His power was also becoming smaller and smaller as well. Kindreth was within arms length to Dark. Suddenly Dark drew his lightsaber and tried slicing Kindreth. With no avail, Kindreth quickly brought his hand towards Dark's chest, flexed his palm and a giant force push shot Dark into several metal walls.
Under the rubble, Dark was clearly knocked out. The teal coloured energy still resignated from Kindreth. Xaira carried Jen towards kindreth with a glitter in her eye. Before Xaira could congratulate him, the ship was shaking.
"Were entering the atmosphere." Kindreth said calmly.
"yeah i figured, this ship is going to burn up and us WITH IT!!!!" Xaira frantically shouted.
Kindreth grinned at Xaira once more, "Trust the force, and the force will Trust you."
He kneeled down in a meditative state. The energy around him suddenly imploded. For a brief moment, there was silence. No explosions, no cracking along the hull, nothing. Than with a blink of light, the energy from Kindreth engulfed around the Jedi's including Dark.
Xaira couldn't remember the last thing, just a giant thud and blackness after...
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Post by Darkmatter on Feb 27, 2006 23:27:54 GMT -5
Sorry it took so long to continue the story. I wasn't sure where I wanted to story to go. I think i got it now. If i could get feedback from my readers, it would be great because I would know how my story will be shaped. Also, if I see somebody else posting, I feel that somebody is reading and at least shows it  |
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Post by Kindreth Kin on Feb 28, 2006 2:05:29 GMT -5
that was awsome dark, i liked it alot. i hate were u stoped though, i was reading thinking ok how do they get out of there, and just when u were about to say u stoped. WHATS UP WITH THAT? lol but it is awsome.
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Post by Darkmatter on Feb 28, 2006 15:56:44 GMT -5
I might kill Xaira off.
Kin, do you have anything to say to that?
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Post by Kindreth Kin on Feb 28, 2006 16:31:17 GMT -5
OUCH, thats gonna hurt, i aint going to say yay or na, it is ur story, if u think it will add excitement to the story that is up to u. I say go with what ur guts says. <caugh> (whispers=DO IT) hay who said that? LOL
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Post by Darkmatter on Feb 28, 2006 22:28:53 GMT -5
To Understand the Force
One must Use the Force
To Use the Force
One must bind with the Force
To Bind with the Force
One Must be the Force
To be the Force
One Must believe the Force
To believe the Force
One Must Understand the Force...
Dark awoke with a quick jerk upwards from the ground. Hearing those words constantly through his head, it felt like an eternity. His eyes, wide awake and searching the surrounding area. Where was he? As he eyes panned from left to right, he noticed thick trees as big as he can see. It was moist, it was damp... it was...
"Dagobah!"
Dark turned right around and saw Yoda.
"Dagobah You are in."
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Post by Kindreth Kin on Mar 1, 2006 11:34:21 GMT -5
Kool i like that, lol
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Post by Xaira on Mar 1, 2006 22:11:48 GMT -5
I might kill Xaira off. Kin, do you have anything to say to that? I will be one pissed off blue glowy. =D |
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Post by Darkmatter on Mar 2, 2006 0:52:29 GMT -5
/slowly backs away from Xaira.
Of course not... what a dumb idea that would be.
/nervous laughter.
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Post by Kindreth Kin on Mar 2, 2006 10:42:57 GMT -5
O um um, told u dont do it dark. no u wouldnt listen.
Hi Darlin. =)
./slowly backs up to the closest exit.
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