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Post by Darkmatter on Apr 19, 2006 21:02:09 GMT -5
rofl.
Okay, I'll add 5 more posts at the end of the week.
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Post by Darkmatter on Apr 23, 2006 1:32:59 GMT -5
Kindreth took another look into the dark tunnel. A gentle breeze came from the cave and braced Kindreth. He wasn't sure what Yoda was talking about. But he sure knew Yoda said he would find answers in this cave.
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Kindreth or whoever, I want to know if you want company in this chapter.
Since your such an avid fan, I am going to make this chapter all about you. A huge character development of you and the introduction of Peicubo and Gausav.
Asap, let me know pal.
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Post by Kindreth Kin on Apr 23, 2006 7:16:14 GMT -5
fine kool with me
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Post by Kindreth Kin on Apr 23, 2006 7:16:45 GMT -5
and what u mean "kindreth or whoever"
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Post by Kindreth Kin on Apr 23, 2006 7:17:50 GMT -5
lol it is ma, KINDRETH the GREAT!!!!!!
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Post by Darkmatter on Apr 23, 2006 19:01:51 GMT -5
lol, it was a question. But i think you want company.
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Post by Kindreth Kin on Apr 23, 2006 23:00:43 GMT -5
ok ur the editor and writer of this story lol, in other words "Ur the Boss"
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Post by Darkmatter on May 1, 2006 21:52:22 GMT -5
sorry, I promise i'll add more. I have a couple of papers I gotta write. Which is why i didn't add the 5 extra posts like i promised. I haven't forgotten!
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Post by Kindreth Kin on May 2, 2006 1:53:47 GMT -5
np. but i am still waiting lol
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Post by Darkmatter on May 5, 2006 22:51:39 GMT -5
....................kindreth i just typed up..... a long ass post that was just lost....
i'm mad....
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Post by Darkmatter on May 8, 2006 13:11:06 GMT -5
Kindreth pondered Yoda's cautious words.
"Only what you take with you."
Kindreth placed his hand around his chin in curiousity. Could this test be about his new chapter in his life with Xaira and the baby? or about the new life exiled Jedi's had to be in, like Dark and Jen. Or what it all entirely different...
"Master Yoda, I don't understand" Doubted Kindreth.
Yoda chuckled. "Not yet of course. To understand is to know, to know is to understand. That is the path in which you need to go through."
It didn't make it easier for Kindreth to understand, but he knew this 'path' is what will make things clear. Kindreth nodded in acknowledgement to Yoda's words of wisdom. He looked towards the dark cave once again. Drawing out a deep breath he slowly began to walk. As he came closer to the cave, the moonlight began to be dimmer and dimmer. Clearly the cave is pitch dark with no light being any reference. Than, a quick breeze blew against Kindreth's face. He noticed it came from inside the cave. He continued to walk. There was no longer any light and it became darker than anything he imagined. His eye sight was no good to him. To one inch in front of him or 1 meter, he could make out nothing. His footsteps were cautious and hesistant, fearing of hitting his foot against something that would trip him. He placed his hands a bit towards the front, just incase he would hit something. He was beginning to doubt this idea. Kindreth turned around to find Yoda, only to see that the entrance to where he entered was gone. It was just as dark as the front. Again the only reference he knew he was forward was the wind, which blew time to time. Kindreth realizes the only way to finish this, is to continue foward, which he did. His fear of bumping into something was beginning to wane.
Obviously he was having no trouble because he continue for 10 minutes with no obstacles. He steps were more relaxed and comfortable. His uneasiness of the dark unknown was dissipating. The only factor that would bother him was the wind, which blew quick and short. This would make him blink purposefully to shield his eyes. Other than that, he was fine.
Suddenly the wind picked up for the very last time and blew against Kindreth's face. He closed his eyes and blinked. When he opened it, he was no longer in the cave.
He noticed, the darkness was no longer anywhere. He eyes drew to the countless humanoids walking around that what looks like to be streets. He also noticed the long streams of vehicles all over the sky. The final clue that was tall limitless buildlings led him to believe he was in Coruscant. The only question was why the cave brought him here. More importantly, which timeline was it.
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Post by Darkmatter on May 8, 2006 13:47:06 GMT -5
"Master Kindreth!" yelled a familiar voice. Kindreth turned around only to see two Jedi's in rookie robes. He knew he they were. Two of the top students in his graduating class of Lightsaber combat, not to mention recently made Jedi Knights. Kindreth smiled.
"Well if it isn't two of the most beautiful and deadly Jedi knights I know."
The females laughed.
"Now master, were in time of war, theres no time to laugh."
The one who just spoked was named Mara. She was a human who home world was Alderaan. She had shoulder length hair and was pretty tall. He body was slender and athletic. The only student to have defeated Kindreth in a sparring match, which he continues to argue he was drunk at the time.
"Shes right you know." Agreed Jade. Although she was not as pretty as Mara, she was altogether a different type of beauty. She was deadly beautiful. Originating from a Planet known a Asatana, the native people were deadly in the arts of close combat and specialized in weidling of swords. The only student to have defeated Kindreth in a sparring match, which he ACTUALLY admitted to have lost to. She had hair just passed her shoulders and was often known as the girl to have beauty matching her ability as a Jedi dueler.
Kindreth nodded. "You both are right, but one cannot remain in despair and seriousness. It will lead to the Dark side."
The two girls nodded. The mood was changed from a sense of friends to a ultimate threat. An explosion sounded from the Jedi Temple, followed by blaster fire. The three looked up towards the Great temple.
"Time to move!" shouted Kindreth. The three disappeared and moved towards the temple.
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Anakin vs.......
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Post by Kindreth Kin on May 9, 2006 13:39:46 GMT -5
Woot, this is great dark. u the man
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Post by Darkmatter on May 10, 2006 7:17:34 GMT -5
lol thanks. The spelling and grammer errors are quite stagnant...... dang
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Post by Kindreth Kin on May 10, 2006 8:27:04 GMT -5
aint even noticed, lol, i know what u r saying lol
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